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	<title>Comments on: Pen, Paper, Action!</title>
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		<title>By: Karen</title>
		<link>http://www.karen-strong.com/2010/04/05/pen-paper-action/comment-page-1/#comment-693</link>
		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Apr 2010 02:15:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Andrea: I love meeting fellow Blue Boarders from Verla Kay. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.

Yes, I&#039;m learning so much from studying action scenes. I hope you stop by later this week and see what you can get out of the examples.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Andrea: I love meeting fellow Blue Boarders from Verla Kay. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.</p>
<p>Yes, I&#8217;m learning so much from studying action scenes. I hope you stop by later this week and see what you can get out of the examples.</p>
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		<title>By: Andrea</title>
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		<dc:creator>Andrea</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Apr 2010 01:21:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Writing a fast-paced action scene is a real challenge for me too. My critiquers help pick up on details that might not work that way in real life. I like the idea that the protag has to make a quick decision or show an instinctive reaction. Thanks for making me think a little deeper! [I found you through the Blue Boards.]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Writing a fast-paced action scene is a real challenge for me too. My critiquers help pick up on details that might not work that way in real life. I like the idea that the protag has to make a quick decision or show an instinctive reaction. Thanks for making me think a little deeper! [I found you through the Blue Boards.]</p>
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		<title>By: Karen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Apr 2010 19:19:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Jody: Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. I love your blog! :)

I love writing in scenes. It keeps me in the moment. Rosenfeld&#039;s book is really good at identifying different types of scenes and what makes them work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Jody: Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. I love your blog! :)</p>
<p>I love writing in scenes. It keeps me in the moment. Rosenfeld&#8217;s book is really good at identifying different types of scenes and what makes them work.</p>
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		<title>By: Jody Hedlund</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jody Hedlund</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Apr 2010 14:36:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Writing in scenes is so key! These are all great tips to keep in mind!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Writing in scenes is so key! These are all great tips to keep in mind!</p>
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		<title>By: Karen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Apr 2010 12:43:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Sharon: I&#039;ve never been to Chautauqua but many of my writer friends have and they have loved it. 

I did get attend the Highlights Whole Novel Workshop in 2008 with Carolyn Coman and Jane Resh Thomas and that was FABULOUS.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Sharon: I&#8217;ve never been to Chautauqua but many of my writer friends have and they have loved it. </p>
<p>I did get attend the Highlights Whole Novel Workshop in 2008 with Carolyn Coman and Jane Resh Thomas and that was FABULOUS.</p>
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