Revision Update: The Middle

So the first round of revision is pretty much done for Act 1 scenes. So the first 75 pages have a better shape than they did originally with the draft. But I'm sure once I go through this whole novel for this revision round, there will plenty to go back and revise. So, here I am in the middle. The infamous middle part of the novel. This is what has given me the most trouble. I'm still stumbling upon what exactly to do to get to the end. It's all about how my characters will react to what … [Read more...]

Quote Only A Novelist Would Love

Yesterday, I found a quote via Tayari Jones with her Logical Links blog post. "I'm not interested in writing short stories. Anything that doesn't take years of your life and drive you to suicide hardly seems worth doing." It's a quote only a novelist would love. From Cormac McCarthy, author of the dystopian novel, The Road. The quote comes from an interview with the Wall Street Journal, Hollywood's Favorite Cowboy, where McCarthy talks about writing and forthcoming movie based on his … [Read more...]

yWriter Software

Since I work in software technology at the day job, I tend to use my left-side of the brain a lot and it bleeds into my writing. I'm a plotter and an outliner. I give props to other writers who can just start writing and let the story lead them to where it needs to go. Not me. I need to know what's going on. I don't need to know everything, but I need to at least have a structure. So I'm a fan of spreadsheets. They are helpful to me during the draft and revision process. But now … [Read more...]

Revision Update: Antagonist Much?

So if you've been reading my blog, you know that I had what I like to call a "moment" with this draft and current revision round. But I had a breakthrough in brainstorming and have been very productive. I'm still revising my Act 1 scenes, but I'm also looking ahead to what's in store for me in Act 2. I finally faced the story problem that had been with me when I was writing the draft. I really didn't have a good antagonist. I had characters that had competitive goals but considering that … [Read more...]