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	<title>Comments on: Revision Update: The Middle</title>
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		<title>By: Karen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Nov 2009 15:37:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah, the point of no return. Definitely a way to make the stakes higher. Right now, I&#039;m looking at some middles of books I&#039;ve loved and trying to figure out what made them tick. I&#039;m sure with you being my book twin, that I can also ask your opinion about these middles too. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah, the point of no return. Definitely a way to make the stakes higher. Right now, I&#8217;m looking at some middles of books I&#8217;ve loved and trying to figure out what made them tick. I&#8217;m sure with you being my book twin, that I can also ask your opinion about these middles too. :)</p>
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		<title>By: Anna</title>
		<link>http://www.karen-strong.com/2009/11/18/revision-update-the-middle/comment-page-1/#comment-236</link>
		<dc:creator>Anna</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Nov 2009 15:06:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah yes, middles are always tricky. I think you&#039;re right about what makes a good middle. I would also add that having a &quot;point of no return&quot; (when things can never go back to being how they were) is a nice way to make the stakes super high. Of course, this is easier said than done. :-) Good luck!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah yes, middles are always tricky. I think you&#8217;re right about what makes a good middle. I would also add that having a &#8220;point of no return&#8221; (when things can never go back to being how they were) is a nice way to make the stakes super high. Of course, this is easier said than done. :-) Good luck!</p>
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