Comments on: Revision Update: Cutting Characters http://www.karen-strong.com/2009/10/28/revision-update-cutting-characters/ Fri, 10 Feb 2012 17:53:26 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Karen http://www.karen-strong.com/2009/10/28/revision-update-cutting-characters/comment-page-1/#comment-196 Karen Thu, 29 Oct 2009 14:05:40 +0000 http://www.karen-strong.com/?p=879#comment-196 Thanks Anna. Good luck on your WIP. And let me know how you like the yWriter too. I'm thinking about testing it out myself. Thanks Anna. Good luck on your WIP. And let me know how you like the yWriter too. I’m thinking about testing it out myself.

]]> By: Anna http://www.karen-strong.com/2009/10/28/revision-update-cutting-characters/comment-page-1/#comment-195 Anna Wed, 28 Oct 2009 16:55:41 +0000 http://www.karen-strong.com/?p=879#comment-195 It sounds like you're doing well, despite having to cut some things. I actually love cutting things - it makes me feel like the story is becoming more efficient! I have the exact same problem with using "I" too much and with the passive voice - the last revision I did of my MG manuscript focused on those specific problems. It reads SO much better now. Good luck!! It sounds like you’re doing well, despite having to cut some things. I actually love cutting things – it makes me feel like the story is becoming more efficient!

I have the exact same problem with using “I” too much and with the passive voice – the last revision I did of my MG manuscript focused on those specific problems. It reads SO much better now.

Good luck!!

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