I’m on Day 5 of my 25 scenes in 25 days. But I’ve also cut a scene. So much for my catchy phrase. I’m thinking it will be replaced but not sure. It may have to wait until the next revision round.
I also cut a character. Alexis was a character in my draft who was supposed to help Grace, my protagonist, but she was only in one scene in Act 1 and didn’t really do anything else—didn’t even make another appearance until Act 3. So even though I do like this character, I decided Alexis would have to go. The things she does to help Grace can be done by two other characters who have a major impact with the storyline.
Two writer friends, Christine Taylor-Butler and Anna Staniszewski, also gave me some great advice about the present vs. past tense situation. I think at least for this revision, I’m going to stick with the past tense. I can always change it later.
Another thing that Christine pointed out was the use of “I’s”. I need to pay attention to this during my revision. Since this novel is in 1st POV, I need to find better ways to re-craft sentences. Not use so many “I’s.” Also working on active verbs. I’m pretty good with spotting passive voice, but now I’m looking for better and stronger verbs.
So, that’s what’s going on with the revision. I have 20 more scenes to revise and so far good progress. Breaking it up like this has taken a lot of stress off me. I still have a long way to go with this revision, but little steps make progress.
It sounds like you’re doing well, despite having to cut some things. I actually love cutting things – it makes me feel like the story is becoming more efficient!
I have the exact same problem with using “I” too much and with the passive voice – the last revision I did of my MG manuscript focused on those specific problems. It reads SO much better now.
Good luck!!
Thanks Anna. Good luck on your WIP. And let me know how you like the yWriter too. I’m thinking about testing it out myself.