Last night, I started to look at my draft and the revision(s) ahead of me. I so want this novel to be done. After throwing away two different versions and hundreds of pages, I want to just be able to be done with it.
But if I’m honest with myself, just like I knew those two previous versions were not working, I also know that this novel is not ready either. I have the structure of the story, and now I have find the heart of it. I can only do that through revision. And it will probably take more than one.
When I think of what I still have ahead of me, or I get bogged down in the writing/creation process, I think of Dennis Lehane, author of books like Mystic River and Gone, Baby, Gone.
He coined this phrase: Ticking-Clock Syndrome.
I first heard of this phrase when I read the foreward to the craft book, Your First Novel by his agent Ann Rittenberg and author Laura Whitcomb.
Lehane’s words was worth the money of the entire book for me. Here’s what he had to say about learning the craft:
“An unfortunate affliction that besets a lot of aspiring writers is one I’ve dubbed the Ticking-Clock Syndrome. You feel the time sweeping past (tick, tick, tick) and your loved ones are starting to wonder when you’re actually going to, you know, publish something (tick, tick, tick)…[]…So maybe, you think, you could take a shortcut or two, just shave a year off the process.
[]…But please remember the tortoise and the hare. This is a marathon, not a sprint. Please remember the part about wanting something vs. earning it. And please remember the ‘no one cares’ part, because if you show your work before it is ready, before it has the power to make someone fall in love, no one will care that you confused wanting it and earning it. They’ll just reject it. And on that day, you’ll say, ‘Darn. I wish I’d waited. What was I thinking?’”
He also applies Ticking-Clock Syndrome to published writers who are building careers. It’s really worth reading his entire foreward in the book.
The gems he gives are priceless.
So even though I know I still have a way to go with this WIP novel, I will not give in to Ticking-Clock Syndrome.
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Rita Lorraine
September 11th, 2009 at 10:30 am
Nice post, Karen. I hear the clock ticking all the time. In fact, since I have a bunch of projects in various stages of completion, I hear what can only be called “cascade ticking.” It’s like living in a house of clocks.
Anyway, your post gives me comfort. I’ve always understood I must learn my craft, but now I understand that I must learn something even more important: I must learn to wait until the work is ready.
Thanks again,
Rita L.
Karen
September 11th, 2009 at 11:22 am
Rita, it can be so frustrating sometimes. I feel like I should be further along in this writing journey—that I should have accomplished more. But I can’t compare myself to others. I can only find my own way. In my own time.
Best of luck to you on your projects. We need your voice in the world. I have faith that you will cultivate your talent and let your writing be known.
Anna
September 11th, 2009 at 12:03 pm
Great post! I have certainly fallen victim to the Ticking Clock Syndrome in the past. It’s so hard to stay reasonable when it comes to your own writing; sometimes you’re sick of looking at the project and you just want to send it out and have someone tell you that it’s amazing. But, of course, if it’s not really ready, then “amazing” probably isn’t the feedback you’re going to get…
Karen
September 11th, 2009 at 12:52 pm
Anna, this is so true! I’ve really been through the ringer with this particular novel, but now I’m so grateful that I didn’t send the two other versions to my agent. They were NOT ready.
I guess I had to go through those other versions to get to this one—which is much better and stronger. Patience is hard, but it is such a virtue.
Paula Chase
September 11th, 2009 at 2:08 pm
Yes, Lord, I hear that clock all the time. And although I’ve come to respect that any progress is better than none, it’s a day-to-day process. Some days I’m more patient than others. Some days I’m happy with the revision of the revision’s revision. And other days I can’t understand why I haven’t gotten any further than “this.” I love what I do, but it’s frustrating often. Lehane’s advice is something I’ve been learning to live by the last nine months.
Karen
September 11th, 2009 at 2:52 pm
I’ll add a Hallelujah too, Paula.
It’s definitely a day-to-day process. It’s like where did 2009 go and why haven’t I finished up “this” novel? LOL.
But we can do this!
Crystal R.
September 15th, 2009 at 1:11 am
Oh, wow! I thought I was the only one who heard the clock clicking . . . so glad I’m not alone! Yes, where DID 2009 go? I had set a goal to start querying this summer, and I’m STILL revising my MG novel. And folks (mostly family) are like, so when are you going to be published? But I’m determined to take my time because I want it to be really, really, polished before I send it to an agent. *Sigh* I guess the key word really is PATIENCE . . .
Karen
September 15th, 2009 at 10:21 am
Crystal: That clock can be really LOUD. But I definitely think you’re doing it the right way. You want your novel to shine and your submissions will be easily rejected if the novel isn’t “ready.”
Best of luck to you!